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Write an informal letter to a friend who has moves away from your town

Write an informal letter to a friend who has moves away from your town kWpLe

Dear Jo How are you? Sorry I haven’t written to you for ages because I have to study with a busy schedule this month. Last weekend, I ran into San on the street and she asked after you. We all miss you so much! Guess what! I’m in hospital! Don’t worry, I just have a slight fever now. Yesterday, my family celebrated my mother's birthday. There were a bunch of sea foods at the party, and you know, I’m really into them so I ate a lot. Unluckily, I had a pain in my stomach. Then, my brother took me to the hospital and the doctor said that I had had food poisoning. Anyway, I’m only in for two days, and the illness won’t stop me from continuing my study for the final tests. I guess you’ve started at your new school in L. A now. How is it? Have you made loads of friends? How about your new life? So many questions! Don’t forget to write again and send me your news. That’s all for now. I’d better go. Love Khanh Dan

Dear Jo

How are you? Sorry I haven’t written to you for ages This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 study with a busy schedule this month. Last weekend, I ran into San on the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).street, and
street and
 she asked after you. We all miss you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much!

Guess what! I’m in hospital! Don’t worry, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 have a slight fever This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Yesterday, my family celebrated my mother's birthday. There were a bunch of sea foods at the party, and you know, I’m really
 into them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I ate a lot. Unluckily
, I had a pain in my stomach. Then, my brother took me to the hospital and the doctor said that I had had food poisoning. Anyway, I’m This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in for two days, and the illness won’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 me from continuing my study for the final This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluates
tests
.

I guess you’ve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at your new school in L. A This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. How is it? Have you made loads of friends? How about your new life? This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 questions! Don’t forget to write again and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me your news.

That’s all for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. I’d better go.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love


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