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You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party.

You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party. x6oy
Dear Reetu, Hope you are doing great. I am writing to ask you a favor. As you know I recently moved to a new house in Burnaby, British Columbia. So, I'm planning to throw a party to have do have a long do you have quality time with my friends and relatives full stock also, they will have chance to be with my house. Well, I'm thinking to invite around 25 guests some of them would be my friends from India and the rest would be our close friends and relatives. I want to add a famous Indian dish called white sauce pasta to the menu. I vividly remembered, last time we tried this delicious dish at your home. However, I also tried to cook at home but literally, it did not have a glimpse of the aroma and taste that you can bring in. So, I would like you to send me the detailed instruction ingredients list and the cooking procedure you used to cook it. as I said, most of my friends from India and you also are Indian and you are also Indian. that's why I thought you would be the best person to ask for the recipe as you are more familiar with the taste of Indian people. I hope you will be sending me all the information as soon as possible. Lots of love for you and your family. take care guys. Yours lovingly, Shikha
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Reetu
, Hope you are doing great. I am writing to ask you a favor. As you know I recently
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house
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, British Columbia.
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, I'm planning to throw a party to have
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do
have a long do you have quality time with my
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friends
and relatives full stock
also
, they will have chance to be with my
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house
.

Well, I'm thinking to invite around 25 guests
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some
of them would be my
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friends
from India and the rest would be our close
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friends
and relatives. I want to
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add
a
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famous
Indian dish called white sauce pasta to the menu. I
vividly
remembered, last time we tried this delicious dish at your home.
However
, I
also
tried to cook at home
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but
literally
, it did not have a glimpse of the aroma and taste that you can bring in.
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So
, I would like you to
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send
me the detailed instruction ingredients list and the cooking procedure you
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used
to cook it.

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as
I said, most of my
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friends
from India and you
also
are Indian and you are
also
Indian.
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that
's why I
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thought
you would be the best person to
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ask for
the recipe as you are more familiar with the taste of Indian
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people
.

I hope you will be sending me all the information as
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soon
as possible. Lots of
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love
for you and your family.
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take
care guys.

Yours
lovingly
,

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Shikha
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IELTS letter You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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