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in class we have been talking a place we live in change. Can you tell me about your neighborhood? Do you think this change positive or negative?

in class we have been talking a place we live in change. Can you tell me about your neighborhood? Do you think this change positive or negative? 7xG2
Hello, Sam. I have received your letter, where you have asked me about how my neighborhood had changed. I would happily answers questions that were asked in letter, since I have just moved to a new house so I can compare two different accommodations. 3 years ago I lived I the сentre of my city. This place had a few advantages, because everything was close, except of my school. I did not want to leave my school in spite of far position of my home. I had to wake up about 2 hours before the lessons start. On the other hand, shops, hospitals and other places were always near. However, it was quite noisy there. Cars were always going down the main street so I could not normally sleep at night. On the contrary, now I live in a residential area near next to my school. Although there is also a main street near the area, it is covered with trees, so I never hear noise at night. Even though school is still quite far from my house, I can wake up in 30 minutes before the school. All shops, malls and other places are far from my house, however I still prefer my actual house to the one, I had 3 years ago. Look after yourself, Arseniy
Hello, Sam.

I have received your letter, where you have asked me about how my neighborhood had
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changed
. I would
happily
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answers
questions that
were asked
in letter, since I have
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just
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moved
to a new
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house
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so
I can compare two
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different
accommodations.

3 years ago I
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lived
I the
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сentre
of my city. This place had a few advantages,
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because
everything was close, except of my
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school
. I did not want to
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leave
my
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school
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in spite of
far position of my home. I had to wake up about 2 hours
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before
the lessons
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start
.

On the other hand
, shops, hospitals and other places were always near.
However
, it was quite noisy there. Cars were always going down the main street
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so
I could not
normally
sleep at night.
On the contrary
,
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now
I
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live
in a residential area near
next
to my
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school
. Although there is
also
a main street near the area, it
is covered
with trees,
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so
I never hear noise at night.

Even though
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school
is
still
quite far from my
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house
, I can wake up in 30 minutes
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before
the
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school
. All shops, malls and other places are far from my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
,
however
I
still
prefer my actual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
to the one, I had 3 years ago.

Look after yourself,

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Arseniy
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IELTS letter in class we have been talking a place we live in change. Can you tell me about your neighborhood? Do you think this change positive or negative?

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
217 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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