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Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you, write a letter to a friend to tell him that you cannot go to theatre

Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you, write a letter to a friend to tell him that you cannot go to theatre mm0d
Dear Khaled Hope you are doing well, I’m doing fine, it’s great news for me, u bought a ticket for me, suddenly I couldn’t attend the theatre for watching movies, i’m really apologise for that. Let Me Explain The Situation, though my life is quite hectic at the moment because, instantly my cousin got accident so that’s why we’re the all family members are depressed. As well as, the doctor said he need rest for few month that’s why i am always with him for assist, therefore, he can’t go to the washroom even he can’t able to the prayer. Overall, you can return the ticket from where u bought, they will return back the money. I look forward to seeing you. Best regards, Shawon Taj
Dear Khaled

Hope you are doing well, I’m doing fine, it’s great news for me, u
bought
a ticket for me,
suddenly
I couldn’t attend the
theatre
for watching movies,
i’m
really
apologise
for that.

Let
Me
Explain
The Situation, though my life is quite hectic at the moment
because
,
instantly
my cousin
got
accident
so
that’s why we’re the all family members
are depressed
.

As well
as, the doctor said he need rest for
few month
that’s why
i
am always with him for assist,
therefore
, he can’t go to the washroom even he can’t able to the prayer.

Overall
, you can return the ticket from where u
bought
, they will
return back
the money.

I look forward to seeing you.

Best regards,

Shawon
Taj
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IELTS letter Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you, write a letter to a friend to tell him that you cannot go to theatre

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  American English
8 paragraphs
125 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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