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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take?

You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take? rNgk
Dear sir or madam, I am a student in German A1 evening batch. I would like to bring to your kind attention that due to some unfortunate circumstances I won't be able to continue in the same batch. I would like to dicuss a possible way to delay my course completion date by 2 months. I am a full-time working professional, and recently I have been communicated that I will be travelling to Germany for a duration of 2 months. In the light of recent events, it would be difficult for me to continue with the part-time course. To be honest, I was learning german as it was evident that I would travel to Germany in about a year for business purposes. But the opputunity arrived earlier than anticipated. I am keen to complete this German level. Unfortunately, it might be deplayed at the moment. Is it possible to continue the same level in a different batch post my return? I gaurantee that I would sharpen my skills in the meantime. Kindly let me know about the process to handle such special circumstances. Looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Angella
Dear sir or madam,

I am a student in German A1 evening batch. I would like to bring to your kind attention that due to
some
unfortunate circumstances I won't be able to continue in the same batch.
I
would like to
dicuss
a possible way to delay my course completion date by 2 months.

I
am a full-time working professional, and recently I have
been communicated
that I will be travelling to Germany for a duration of 2 months. In the light of recent
events
, it would be difficult for me to continue with the part-time course. To be honest, I was learning
german
as it was evident that I would travel to Germany in about a year for business purposes.
But
the
opputunity
arrived earlier than anticipated.

I am keen to complete this German level. Unfortunately, it might be
deplayed
at the moment. Is it possible to continue the same level in a
different
batch post my return? I
gaurantee
that I would sharpen my
skills
in the meantime.

Kindly
let
me know about the process to handle such special circumstances. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

Angella
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IELTS letter You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take?

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