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You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about prices Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about prices Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________ 33LY
Mr Smith I am writing to let you know that i planned to visit singapore for the short period of time as an tourist. I would like to rent an comfortable apartment for my visit with the sea view and a spacious living room. I planned to be there on 15th of April. All the arrangements for my arrival will be done by my friend. I want you to book the apartment for me from 15th of April to 28th of April. It should be long flight for me, therefore i want a quite surrounding thereby i can rest properly. Additionally, i could be pleased if you send me the price details about your accommodations thereby, i can made my mind about which settlement suits me the best. You can contact me back on Garryjawandha98@gmail. com I'm looking forward to your reply. Best Regards, Garry Jawandha
Mr Smith

I am writing to
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let
you know that
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i
planned to visit
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singapore
for the short period of time as
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an
tourist. I would like to rent
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an
comfortable apartment for my visit with the sea view and a spacious living room.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
planned to be there on 15th of April. All the arrangements for my arrival will
be done
by my friend. I want you to book the apartment for me from 15th of April to 28th of April. It should be long flight for me,
therefore
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
want a quite surrounding thereby
Did you mean "I"?
i
can rest
properly
.

Additionally
,
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i
could be
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pleased
if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me the price
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details
about your accommodations thereby,
Did you mean "I"?
i
can
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made
my mind about which settlement suits me the best. You can contact me back on Garryjawandha98@gmail.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com


I'm looking forward to your reply.

Best Regards,

Garry
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Jawandha

IELTS letter You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about prices Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________

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  American English
7 paragraphs
145 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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