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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet. Describe other household duties.

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet. Describe other household duties. VkYw
Dear Martin Hope this letter finds you well and in good spirits. First, I’d like to thank you for deciding to take care of my house and lovely companion during my family visit. I am writing to brief you about a couple of activities which are ought to be done while I am meeting my relatives in India. Firstly, you can find my house keys below the door mat of my apartment. You should be able to get in easily You can also find some cash in the first drawer to the left side of cabinet in my bedroom which you can use to buy pedigree for my favorite canine at home. Although my dog recognizes you, I’d suggest you take him for a walk everyday which will not only ensure that he does not get bored but will also let you take some fresh air. My maid comes at 11 every morning for cleaning, cooking and washing my car whose keys are with you since last weekend (I suppose you didn’t crash it yet, laughs! ). In any case of emergency, you can buzz me up at +91-7746399281 and drop me a text on WhatsApp. I’ll be available all the time except when I’m snoring (just kidding). Kill the call button whenever you need me. Thanks again and lot of love Cheers! Adnan
Dear Martin

Hope this letter finds you well and in
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good
spirits.
First
, I’d like to thank you for deciding to take care of my
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house
and lovely companion during my family visit.

I am writing to brief you about a couple of activities which are ought to
be done
while I am meeting my relatives in India.
Firstly
, you can find my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
keys below the door mat of my apartment. You should be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
in
easily
You can
also
find
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some
cash in the
first
drawer to the
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left
side of cabinet in my bedroom which you can
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use
to
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buy
pedigree for my favorite canine at home. Although my dog recognizes you, I’d suggest you take him for a walk
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everyday
which will not
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only
ensure that he does not
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get
bored
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but
will
also
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let
you take
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some
fresh air.

My maid
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comes
at 11 every morning for cleaning, cooking and washing my car whose keys are with you since last weekend (I suppose you didn’t crash it
yet
, laughs!
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)
. In any case of emergency, you can buzz me up at +91-7746399281 and drop me a text on WhatsApp. I’ll be available all the time except when I’m snoring (
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just
kidding). Kill the call button whenever you need me.

Thanks again and
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lot of
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love


Cheers!

Adnan
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet. Describe other household duties.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
223 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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