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write a letter to an english speaking friend that you get a new job

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Dear Angelina, I hope you are in the pink of your health. Hear, i am writting a letter to let you that i got a new job as a sale excutive manager in a company. As, you know before this job i was worked in a store. There i face difficulties to manage finacial issue. My personal life suffered due to low wages after marrige. Fortunatly, A couple of month ago i got a new job with hike selary also some facalities such as accommudition, medical benifites, and food. Hear by i also share an other good with you that last week i bought a car. its not a new its a second hand car but good in condition.
Dear Angelina, I hope you are in the pink of your health. Hear,
i
am
writting
a letter to
let
you that
i
got
a new job as a sale
excutive
manager in a
company
. As, you know
before
this job
i
was worked
in a store. There
i
face difficulties to manage
finacial
issue. My personal life suffered due to low wages after
marrige
.
Fortunatly
,
A couple of month
ago
i
got
a new job with hike
selary
also
some
facalities
such as
accommudition
, medical
benifites
, and food. Hear by
i
also
share
an other
good
with you that last week
i
bought
a car.
its
not a new
its
a second hand car
but
good
in condition.
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IELTS letter write a letter to an english speaking friend that you get a new job

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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