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You are going to know about a course on line

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to enquire about some information concerning the CEFR training course which educates five language skills for English teachers by qualified instructors online. I am inevitably, an English teacher at school who has been working with young learners. For the time being We are being demanded C 1 level or IELTS certificate to acquire better position or enough reputation among others who deal with. In this case, it is undeniable fact that I ought be instructed the education of advanced language skills which is as it has been stated above. In order to achieve my foremost goal I am going to know about detailed data from you. After that I desire to start studying with the assistance of you in upcoming period. Consequently, I would like to know registration date, fee for the course. Moreover I wanted to know how long I should prepare in the training. I would be so grateful if you contact me on the phone or via telegram. Yours faithfully Sarah Brown
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
about
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
information concerning the CEFR training course which educates five language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
for English teachers by qualified instructors online.

I am
inevitably
, an English teacher at school who has been working with young learners. For the time being We are
being demanded
C 1 level or IELTS certificate to acquire better position or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
reputation among others who deal with.

In this case
, it is undeniable fact that I ought
be instructed
the education of advanced language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
which is as it has
been stated
above. In order to achieve my foremost goal I am going to know about detailed data from you.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
that I desire to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
studying with the assistance of you in upcoming period.
Consequently
, I would like to know registration date, fee for the course.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Moreover
I wanted to know how long I should prepare in the training.

I would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
grateful if you contact me on the phone or via telegram.

Yours
faithfully


Sarah Brown
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IELTS letter You are going to know about a course on line

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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