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You reside in a multi-ethic housing society which is planning to organize a culture week where people will show case their culture. they need someone to head the organizing committee.

You reside in a multi-ethic housing society which is planning to organize a culture week where people will show case their culture. they need someone to head the organizing committee. W5XND
Dear Ms. Patel, My self Devanshi Patel. I hope every things is fine. I am resident of your same building. I hear about our all committee member of apartment planning for organizing a cultural week program, and you all are searching for head of the organizing committee. I am writing this letter for I really glad for make head of this organizing committee. I have all ready decided one drama about our culture. so, I can easily convincing to every one and they all participate with very excitedly. I personally handling this program very well manner. when I was in collage I have special experience for handling many events during that time. so, I am capable and too eager for manage this events. other member and participant all are very enjoy drama a lot. So, I am very interesting to handling this committee. I am sure for that you never disappoint with my arraignments. I hope you to giving me this opportunity for this time. I am eagerly waiting for your answer. Yours Best Regards, Devanshi Patel.
Dear Ms. Patel,

My self
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Devanshi
Patel. I hope every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "thing"?
things
is fine. I am resident of your same building.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hear about our all committee member of apartment planning for organizing a cultural week program, and you all are searching for head of the organizing committee.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter for
Did you mean "I am"?
I
really
glad for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
head of this organizing committee.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
Did you mean "already"?
all ready
decided one drama about our culture.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
so
, I can
easily
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "convince"
convincing
to every
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
one and
they all participate with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
excitedly
. I
personally
handling this program
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well manner.
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when
I was in collage I have special experience for handling
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
during that time.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
so
, I am capable and too eager for manage
Did you mean "these"?
this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
other
member and participant all are
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very
enjoy drama a lot.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
interesting to handling this committee. I am sure for that you never disappoint with my arraignments. I hope you to giving me this opportunity for this time.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
eagerly
waiting for your answer.

Yours Best Regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Devanshi
Patel.
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IELTS letter You reside in a multi-ethic housing society which is planning to organize a culture week where people will show case their culture. they need someone to head the organizing committee.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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