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Invite your friend to birthday party .explain what happens at the party.

Invite your friend to birthday party. explain what happens at the party. pLAMd
Dear Anna, I am writing this letter to invite you and your family members to my birthday party. I will be held on 23rd August 2021 at my residence. The party will beginn at 6 00 p. m in the evining. There will be my classmates and students friends too. In addition to this, I will invite a famous singers in our city I believe they can do enjoyble mood. Moreover I ordered gigant strawberry cake and delicious meals with fresh salads. Hoping to meet you at the party. Thanks, John
Dear Anna, I am writing this letter to invite you and your family members to my birthday party. I will
be held
on 23rd August 2021 at my residence. The party will
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beginn
at 6 00 p. m in the
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evining
. There will be my classmates and students friends too.
In addition
to this, I will invite a
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famous
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "singer"?
singers
in our city I believe they can do
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enjoyble
mood.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Moreover
I ordered
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gigant
strawberry cake and delicious meals with fresh salads. Hoping to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you at the party. Thanks, John
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IELTS letter Invite your friend to birthday party. explain what happens at the party.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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