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Letter to local newspaper regarding cash award

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Dear Sir or Madam, I write this email with reference to the news published in your esteemed daily newspaper regarding the cash award being offered to eligible people who have served for the welfare of our community. I would like to take this opportunity to draw your attention to the Fishing Freaks, who is an emerging You-tuber. He had caught the world-wide media attention after assisting Mr. Rahul Gandhi while his boating journey to understand the problems of fisherman Now, talking about his contributions towards our community I want to highlight the efforts he has taken up to support poor children with their online education in this inopportune times of pandemic. Along with that he has taken extreme measures to collaborate with the local bodies to bring awareness among our people about the coron-virus and the benefits of staying at homes and taking extreme precautionary in health. Additionally he has started a non-profit IELTS training app that will support numerous students in enhancing their English speaking ability there by helping them to be confident in their lives In my perspective ordinary people like these who take extraordinary steps or measures to support our commuity should be recognized as well as honoured so that it will be a motivation for our youger generation. So I respectfully request the newspaper authorities to review his case and present him with a cash award of Rs 1, 00, 000. I look forward to hearing a positive reponse from you at the earliest. Yours faithfully, XZ.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I write this email with reference to the news published in your esteemed daily newspaper regarding the cash award
being offered
to eligible
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who have served for the welfare of our community.

I would like to take this opportunity to draw your attention to the Fishing Freaks, who is an emerging You-tuber. He had caught the world-wide media attention after assisting Mr. Rahul Gandhi while his boating journey to understand the problems of fisherman

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, talking about his contributions towards our community I want to highlight the efforts he has taken up to support poor children with their online education in this inopportune times of pandemic. Along with that he has taken extreme measures to collaborate with the local bodies to bring awareness among our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
about the
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coron-virus
and the benefits of staying at homes and taking extreme precautionary in health.
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Additionally
he has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
a non-profit IELTS training app that will support numerous students in enhancing their
Did you mean the adjective "English-speaking"?
English speaking
ability there by helping them to be confident in their
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lives


In my perspective ordinary
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people
like these who take extraordinary steps or measures to support our
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commuity
should
be recognized
as well
as
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honoured
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so
that it will be a motivation for our
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youger
generation.
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So
I
respectfully
request the newspaper authorities to review his case and present him with a cash award of Rs 1, 00, 000.

I look forward to hearing a
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positive
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reponse
from you at the earliest.

Yours
faithfully
,

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XZ
.
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IELTS letter Letter to local newspaper regarding cash award

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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