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I am writing to enquire about taking english lessons with you.

I am writing to enquire about taking english lessons with you. 3xVWw
D ear sir. I am writing to enquire about taking ENGLISH lesson with you. I saw the advert about you at the corner of the street and I believe that you are the right person I am looking for. I am going to learn english language such as native speakers so I hope that to take part in your some lessons. My reason for wanting to learn this language is because I Will take an exam the next month from CEFR to have feringe benefit. I really want sail through an exam and gain requirements. I would be grateful if you could let me know What availability you have. Twise a week would be great if that is possible. Please, let me know how much charge for tuition and how long each lesson would Last. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully
D ear sir. I am writing to
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enquire
about taking ENGLISH lesson with you. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
the advert about you at the corner of the street and I believe that you are the right person I am looking for.
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I
am going to learn
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english
language such as native speakers
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so
I hope that to
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take part
in your
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some
lessons. My reason for wanting to learn this language is
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because
I Will take an exam the
next
month from CEFR to have
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feringe
benefit. I
really
want sail through an exam and gain requirements. I would be grateful if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know What availability you have.
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Twise
a week would be great if
that is
possible.
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Please
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know how much charge for tuition and how long each lesson would Last. I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Yours
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
faithfully

IELTS letter I am writing to enquire about taking english lessons with you.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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