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Hi Dave, How have you been since we last met? I thought I’d drop you a line and see if you fancy coming over for Bonfire night which is on November 5th. Bonfire night is a great event in England, particularly in my hometown. It starts as soon as the sun has set because the event is held around a huge bonfire. As the weather is cold, the bonfire adds wonderful warmth. On the fire, there’s a guy which represents Guy Fawkes, a man who once tried to blow up Parliament. On top of that there’s also fireworks and a chance to cook your own food on the fire, which I’m sure you’ll love. While you’re over, we’ll be able to do a trip to London as I know you’ve always wanted to visit. The Christmas lights will have been switched on by then and they are amazing. You’ll also be able to visit the Christmas markets and do all your Christmas shopping. I really hope you’ll be able to come over. It won’t be the same without you. Write back soon, Sandra
Hi Dave,

How have you been since we last met?

I
thought
I’d drop you a line and
see
if you fancy coming over for Bonfire night which is on November 5th.

Bonfire night is a great
event
in England,
particularly
in my hometown. It
starts
as
soon
as the sun has set
because
the
event
is held
around a huge bonfire. As the weather is
cold
, the bonfire
adds
wonderful warmth. On the fire, there’s a guy which represents Guy Fawkes, a
man
who once tried to blow up Parliament.
On top of that
there’s
also
fireworks and a chance to cook your
own
food on the fire, which I’m sure you’ll
love
.

While you’re over, we’ll be able to do a trip to London as I know you’ve always wanted to visit. The Christmas lights will have
been switched
on by
then and
they are amazing. You’ll
also
be able to visit the Christmas markets and do all your Christmas shopping.

I
really
hope you’ll be able to
come
over. It won’t be the same without you.

Write back
soon
,

Sandra
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter

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  American English
8 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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