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You are going to go to the cinema this weekend but not alone.Write a letter to your friend.

You are going to go to the cinema this weekend but not alone. Write a letter to your friend. YwYP5

Dear AnnaI am very happy to your letter. I am glad to hearing you again. I am planning go to the cinema this weekend. Because, this Sunday or Saturday my best film is showing Of course, I brought two ticket for this film. But I am alone, I do not like to watching film when I am alone. I invite you this film on Sunday or Saturday. You can watch film when you are free. because this film shows only at weekend. Please go with me to the cinema. I know if you go to cinema to watching film with me, this moment will be wonderful and memorable. If you agree with me you have call me. I wait you soon. I am looking for hearing from you soon. Best wishesDiyora

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 am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy to your letter. I am glad to hearing you again. I am planning go to the cinema this weekend. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, this Sunday or Saturday my best film is showing Of course
, I brought two Possible agreement error. The noun 'ticket' seems to be countable, so consider using: "tickets".tickets
ticket
 for this film. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I am alone, I do not like to watching film when I am alone. I invite you this film on Sunday or Saturday. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 film when you are free. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBecause
because
 this film This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 at weekend. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 me to the cinema. I know if you go to cinema to watching film with me, this moment will be wonderful and memorable. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with me you have Possible agreement error – use past participle here: "called".called
call
 me. I wait you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. I am looking for hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Best Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphwishesDiyora.wishesDiyora!wishesDiyora?wishesDiyora:wishesDiyora,wishesDiyora;
wishesDiyora