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I hope you are in pink of your health. I have exciting news for you, I am organizing a birthday party for my wife this year.

I hope you are in pink of your health. I have exciting news for you, I am organizing a birthday party for my wife this year. JwG6D

Dear Seema, I hope you are in pink of your health. I have exciting news for you, I am organizing a birthday party for my wife this year. I am writing this letter to you about the recipe for butter chicken that we had when I was at your place. I know that you are really stuck with your current assignments due to which you already missed my birthday last month. I wanted to inform you that on 17th November, I am throwing a party for my wife on her 26th birthday. I want you to wrap up everything beforehand and meanwhile what you can do is, Share the recipe for Butter chicken that cocked on your anniversary, I must say that was scrumptious. While many of my friends are vegetarian, we have some guests who enjoy that taste of meat. For vegetarian dishes, I have hired a chef so that guests don’t complain about the taste. For the meat, nothing beats the butter chicken and your recipe is cherry on the top. Eagerly waiting for the recipe. With Love, Nikhil

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I hope you are in pink of your health. I have exciting news for you, I am organizing a birthday party for my wife this year. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 am writing this letter to you about the recipe for butter chicken that we had when I was at your place.

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 assignments due to which you already missed my birthday last month. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 wanted to inform you that on 17th November, I am throwing a party for my wife on her 26th birthday. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 of my friends are vegetarian, we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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 guests who enjoy that taste of meat. For vegetarian dishes, I have hired a chef This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 that guests don’t complain about the taste. For the meat, nothing beats the butter chicken and your recipe is cherry on the top.

Eagerly
 waiting for the recipe.

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Love
,

Nikhil