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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties R7Vp

Dear Jim, I hope you are doing well; I am writing this letter to thank you for agreeing to look after my house and pet while I'm gone for a holiday, i also want to tell you about some details, instructions and duties that you have to look after while I am away. Firstly, I would not be there to greet you at home because by the time you arrive, i will already be at airport so if you have any difficulty you can contact me on my cell number, however i will on roaming so i won't be able to respond at the moment. Secondly, give food to the dog two times a day; he goes on evening walk every day and keep the dog inside the house all day because he gets scared, if locked outside and might run away. Lastly, you just have to keep the house mess free, switch off all the lights of the house when you go to sleep and the plants in backyard needs water every once a week. I hope your stay at my house goes well, if you still have any confusion or you get in an emergency, you can call me anytime. Yours truly, Sarah

Dear Jim,

I hope you are doing well; I am writing this letter to thank you for agreeing to look after my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 and pet while I'm gone for a holiday, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
also
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, instructions and duties that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 look after while I am away.

Firstly
, I would not be there to greet you at home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 by the time you arrive, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will already be at airport This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 if you have any difficulty you can contact me on my cell number, however
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 will on roaming This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Did you mean "I"?I
i
 won't be able to respond at the moment.

Secondly
, give food to the dog two times a day; he goes on evening walk every day and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the dog inside the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 all day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 scared, if locked outside and might run away.

Lastly
, you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 mess free, switch off all the lights of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 when you go to sleep and the plants in backyard needs water every once a week.

I hope your stay at my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 goes well, if you still
 have any confusion or you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 in an emergency, you can call me anytime.

Yours truly
,

Sarah