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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of your job, explain why it is important to you, suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of your job, explain why it is important to you, suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference. bkrW
Dear Mr. Williams, I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit. I am George Peter, one of your former high school students at Saint Xavier’s School, Queensland. I am writing this to ask you of a favour to write a reference letter for me. As I am going to apply for the post of senior design executive at the Amazon, the company’s application policy requires a reference letter by a former school teacher. Let me explain you the situation. I have been wanting to get placed in this company since about a year and as soon as I got to know that a recent vacancy meets the level of my qualifications, I do not want to lose this golden opportunity of giving my career a new direction. I have been working really hard to clear the interview rounds and that is why this letter written by you is going to help me a lot. Kindly ensure that you mention points such as my character, overall performance and my involvement in social groups of the school. Also, please don’t forget to mention that I was the team leader of the school baseball group. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, George Peter.
Dear Mr. Williams,

I hope this
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letter
finds you in
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good
health and spirit. I am George Peter, one of your former high
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school
students at Saint Xavier’s
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School
, Queensland.
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I
am writing this to ask you of a
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favour
to write a reference
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letter
for me. As I am going to apply for the post of senior design executive at the Amazon, the
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company
’s application policy requires a reference
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letter
by a former
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school
teacher.

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Let
me
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explain
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you
the situation. I have been wanting to
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get
placed in this
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company
since about a year and as
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soon
as I
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got
to know that a recent vacancy meets the level of my qualifications, I do not want to lose this golden opportunity of giving my career a new direction. I have been working
really
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hard
to
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clear
the interview rounds and
that is
why this
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letter
written by you is going to
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help
me a lot.

Kindly ensure that you mention points such as my character,
overall
performance and my involvement in social groups of the
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school
.
Also
,
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please
don’t forget to mention that I was the team leader of the
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school
baseball group.

Thank you in advance.

Yours
sincerely
,

George Peter.
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IELTS letter You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of your job, explain why it is important to you, suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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