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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: =>say what job you have applied for =>explain why you want this job =>suggest what information the teacher should include

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: =>say what job you have applied for =>explain why you want this job =>suggest what information the teacher should include L671
Dear Sir, I hope you are good health and doing well. I am writing this letter to seek a reference for the job applied. I had applied for the job of a professor for one of the reputed institute. As you know, I had a keen interest in paying the role of a teacher in our annual function and hence choose this field as my career to take one step forward towards my goal. Similarly, to be independent and to start from the renowned organization helps to boost my career ahead. Along, they are paying me lucrative salary and additionally some fringe benefits. I think is one of the golden opportunity and I desperately need this job. Moreover, I would request you to please mention my credentials, academic records while writing the letter. Likewise, if you could add some extra information about my performance, it will help me to secure the position. Yours sincerely, Tara Sharma
Dear Sir,

I hope you are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health and doing well. I am writing this letter to seek a reference for the job applied.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
had applied for the job of a professor for one of the reputed institute. As you know, I had a keen interest in paying the role of a teacher in our annual function and
hence
choose this field as my career to take one step forward towards my goal.

Similarly
, to be independent and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
from the renowned organization
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to boost my career ahead. Along, they are paying me lucrative salary and
additionally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
fringe benefits. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
is one of the golden opportunity and I
desperately
need this job.

Moreover
, I would request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
mention my credentials, academic records while writing the letter.
Likewise
, if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extra information about my performance, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to secure the position.

Yours
sincerely
,

Tara Sharma
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IELTS letter You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: =>say what job you have applied for =>explain why you want this job =>suggest what information the teacher should include

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  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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