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write a letter to the parents who posted advertisement in an Australian magazine regarding someone to live with family for 6 months and look after their six-year-old child

write a letter to the parents who posted advertisement in an Australian magazine regarding someone to live with family for 6 months and look after their six-year-old child PXQe2

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Harshita Sathe, doing my PhD in child psychology in University of Australia. Today morning I came across Times of Australia's advertisement given by you regarding requirement of caretaker for your six-year-old-child. So I am writing this with regards to the job application for the same. As I mentioned early, I am studying PhD in child psychology and this job being with your child full time will help me in my research assignment as it revolves around the childrens' point of view towards daily chores and staying with you will also cater my shelter needs as I do not own permanent residence here and recently shifted to this city. Myself being a care taker of your child will be beneficial for baby also, because I can leveraged child with his/her studies as well as with homework. Also I am good at many type of inhouse and ground sports, this can help child to take care of physical fitness. I will be completing my paper work in leisure time and as I am new to Australia you don't have to worry about my friends visiting my place. Also I will get to learn about new places and foods from you. So, I will be looking for your acceptance for this sincere request. Your's faithfully, Harshita Sathe

Dear Sir or Madam,

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 to learn about new places and foods from you.

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So
, I will be looking for your acceptance for this sincere request.

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Your's
faithfully
,

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