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Write a letter to inquiry about the memory course that advertised recently

Write a letter to inquiry about the memory course that advertised recently K0JQ3
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to write this letter to inquiry about the memory course that I saw your advertisement recently. My full name is Le Xuan Tien. I was born in 1993. I’m currently a freelancer in the field of marketing online. Firstly, Let me tell you about my memory problem. I’m going to attend an IELTS test to get an English certificate that I suppose to for my next job application in urgent because I will join take the test at the end of next month. But, there have been many tasks to do if I want to achieve the mark I need. One of them is improving my vocabulary, which is definitely one of the vital components that can lead a candidate to succeed in the IELTS Exam. However, there have been many new words, I have calculated that I need to master at least 3000 new words to get the band score I aim to. Learning 3000 new words in just about 1 month, that made me extremely crazy. I feel really tough to remember words. In my learning process, I made a goal that I need to learn 100 new words per day. I worked hard and followed my learning plan in a week. In the consequence, when I review how many words I remember, I just minimize approximately 30% in total. That’s a really bad result and I feel really nervous when the exam is coming soon. I feel like I probably got the wrong method to memorize new words more effectively. And I hope I can solve my problem with your memory course. Could you please give more information about methods used on the course, the course fee and typical dates for my consideration? I hope your cause can really fit my expectation and help me improve my memory for only a short time. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Tien Le Xuan
Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to write this letter to inquiry about the
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memory
course that I
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saw
your advertisement recently.

My full name is Le
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Xuan
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Tien
. I
was born
in 1993. I’m
currently
a freelancer in the field of marketing online.
Firstly
,
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Let
me
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tell
you about my
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memory
problem.

I’m going to attend an IELTS
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test
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an English certificate that I suppose to for my
next
job application in urgent
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because
I will
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join
take the
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test
at the
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end
of
next
month.
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But
, there have been
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many
tasks to do if I want to achieve the mark I need. One of them is improving my vocabulary, which is definitely one of the vital components that can lead a candidate to succeed in the IELTS Exam.
However
, there have been
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many
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new
words, I have calculated that I need to master at least 3000
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new
words to
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get
the band score I aim to.

Learning 3000
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new
words in
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just
about 1 month, that made me
extremely
crazy. I feel
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really
tough to remember words. In my learning process, I made a goal that I need to learn 100
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new
words per day. I worked
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hard
and followed my learning plan in a week. In the consequence, when I review how
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many
words I remember, I
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just
minimize approximately 30% in total. That’s a
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really
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bad
result and I feel
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really
nervous when the exam is coming
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soon
. I feel like I
probably
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got
the
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wrong
method to memorize
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new
words more
effectively
. And I hope I can solve my problem with your
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memory
course.

Could you
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please
give more information about methods
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used
on the course, the course fee and typical dates for my consideration? I hope your cause can
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really
fit my expectation and
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help
me
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improve
my
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memory
for
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only
a short time.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Le
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IELTS letter Write a letter to inquiry about the memory course that advertised recently

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  American English
9 paragraphs
325 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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