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letter to a frnd advising about coarse abroad 1. what to do 2. what benefits 3. help

letter to a frnd advising about coarse abroad 1. what to do 2. what benefits 3. help XD6kr

Dear Lisa, Hope this letter finds you in good health and spirits. I am doing fine here. Firstly, thank you for considering as someone who can help you with an advice with such an important matter. I came to a conclusion, after lot of thoughts that it is best for you to come to United Kingdom for the masters coarse. As a matter of fact, you have great academic results and the required IELTS score will render you with the scholarship in the top rated universities in the UK. This is definitely the perfect opportunity to achieve a great career. However, you may need to pay for the first semester, subsequently, the scholarship will be applied, moreover, you can save money from that, which is usually not possible in your country. In addition, the degree has imperative value all over the world and adds up with further research practices in any part of the world which is certainly a positive notion. The application form will be available on the website WWW. Masters. Kudu, furthermore I can go to the universities to acquire information along with the affordable accommodation details. Feel free to contact me for any further questions, I will respond with the replies. Best regards,

Dear Lisa,

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, you may need to pay for the first
 semester, subsequently
, the scholarship will be applied
, moreover
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 not possible in your country.

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.

Feel free to contact me for any further
 questions, I will respond with the replies.

Best regards, 