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You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that I will be attending the Advanced Life Insurance course, being held from Tuesday 24th April until 27th April, at the University of Hartford. I will be arriving on the afternoon of Monday 23th and will be leaving on the morning of Saturday the 28th of April, so I will require a single room for this time. I would prefer my own bathroom, if this is possible, but do not mind sharing if I have to; however, as I am wheelchair-bound, the room will have to be disability friendly. Could you please tell me how much this will cost and how I should make a payment? Do you accept VISA? As I do not know the area, I would also be grateful if you could provide some information about getting to and from the University. Will I need to take public transport from the station or is there a University bus service? Any information on what to see and do in the area would also be greatly appreciated. Thank you for your assistance. Alex Jones

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I will be attending the Advanced Life Insurance course, being held
 from Tuesday 24th April until 27th April, at the University of Hartford.

I will be arriving on the afternoon of Monday Please check the suffix, if this is an ordinal number.21st22nd23rd
23th
 and will be leaving on the morning of Saturday the 28th of April, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I will require a single room for this time. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 would prefer my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 bathroom, if this is possible, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 do not mind sharing if I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
; however
, as I am wheelchair-bound, the room will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be disability friendly. Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me how much this will cost and how I should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a payment? Do you accept VISA?

As I do not know the area, I would also
 be grateful if you could provide This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information about getting to and from the University. Will I need to take public transport from the station or is there a University bus service? Any information on what to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 and do in the area would also
 be greatly
 appreciated.

Thank you for your assistance.

Alex Jones