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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.

Dear DanishI'm writing this letter to tell you about last my trip so that you can also visit to that place in your coming Holidays. Last year i went to Manali. It is such a wonderful place to enjoy our holidays. I went there with my cousins, and they all were also feel at the moon when they get to know that we are going to Manali. In Manali there are very good places to stay but we choose a hotel name Taj, reason being it was very near to the supermarket and they have affordable and good services in their hotel. We spend 5 days in this Hotel and it was just like a heaven. This will be a good destination for your vacation trip you can enjoy the weather as well food. There are many places to eat but i really enjoyed Punajbi food saag. This is a place where you can roam because there are various place to visit, majority of people love to visit this place due to its beauty. As you are going to make plan for your trip so i would love to reccoment this place, you will love to visit it. Keep in touch sandeep
Dear
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'm writing this letter to
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last my
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in your coming Holidays. Last year
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i
went to
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Manali
. It is such a wonderful
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place
to enjoy our holidays. I went there with my cousins, and they all were
also
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get
to know that we are going to
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Manali
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Manali
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very
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good
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places
to stay
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we choose a hotel name
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Taj
, reason being it was
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very
near to the
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supermarket and
they have affordable and
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good
services in their hotel. We spend 5 days in this
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Hotel and
it was
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just
like a heaven. This will be a
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good
destination for your vacation trip you can enjoy the weather
as well
food. There are
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many
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places
to eat
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but
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i
really
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Punajbi
food
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saag
. This is a
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place
where you can roam
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because
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to
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,
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majority of
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people
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love
to
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visit
this
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place
due to its beauty. As you are going to
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make
plan for your trip
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would
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love
to
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reccoment
this
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place
, you will
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visit
it.
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Keep
in touch

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sandeep
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.

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