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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have wQaE
Dear Mr. Naik, I am writing this letter to show my interest to be the social events' organiser. I completed my studies in entrepreneurship and I did many projects on organising events for marriage functions and so on. I would like to seize a chance of highlighting my skills as the organiser. Furthermore, I would request you to provide me more detail information about types of social events such as get to gather, meetings or any kinds of ceremony. Beside this, please let me know what all requirements I need to arrange for events. Moreover, I have the expertise to arrange decoration for the grand party with the arrangements for lunch, dinner and live singers for entertaining guests. I have lots of experience to choose the best clothes for brides and grooms at marriage function so, I can organise any social events If possible give me a chance to become an organiser, then I can show my talent. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Amita Dholakia
Dear Mr.
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Naik
,

I am writing this letter to
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show
my interest to be the social
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events
'
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organiser
. I completed my studies in entrepreneurship and I did
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many
projects on
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organising
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events
for marriage functions and
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so
on.
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I
would like to seize a chance of highlighting my
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skills
as the
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organiser
.

Furthermore
, I would request you to provide me more detail information about types of social
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events
such as
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get
to gather, meetings or any kinds of ceremony. Beside this,
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please
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let
me know what all requirements I need to arrange for
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events
.

Moreover
, I have the expertise to arrange decoration for the grand party with the arrangements for lunch, dinner and
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live
singers for entertaining guests. I have lots of experience to choose the best clothes for brides and grooms at marriage function
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so
, I can
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organise
any social
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events


If possible give me a chance to become an
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organiser
, then I can
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show
my talent.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Amita
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Dholakia
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IELTS letter You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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