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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. yPxjg
Dear Sir or Madam, Hope you are doing well. My name is Sam Greary and I am writing to apply for the job which has been advertised in our local newspaper. I believe that my experience aligns with the requirements of this role. I am currently a part-time student at the Vancouver University, and looking for a part-time job. My place is just two blocks away from your restaurant. Therefore, I have more flexibility to schedule my shifts. Moreover, I have 2 years work experience as a waitress at the Park restaurant. With experience, I developed my communication skills to cooperate with co-workers and to have better communication with customers. I believe I can contribute to your restaurant in the positive way. I am available anytime in this week for an interview. Please feel free to contact me if you have questions or want to arrange the interview. I look forward to a positive response from your end. Yours Sincerely, Sam Greary
Dear Sir or Madam,

Hope you are doing well. My name is Sam
Greary and
I am writing to apply for the job which has
been advertised
in our local newspaper. I believe that my experience aligns with the requirements of this role.

I am
currently
a part-time student at the Vancouver University, and looking for a part-time job. My place is
just
two blocks away from your restaurant.
Therefore
, I have more flexibility to schedule my shifts.

Moreover
, I have 2 years work experience as a waitress at the Park restaurant. With experience, I developed my communication
skills
to cooperate with co-workers and to have better communication with customers. I believe I can contribute to your restaurant in the
positive
way.

I am available anytime in this week for an interview.
Please
feel free to contact me if you have questions or want to arrange the interview. I look forward to a
positive
response from your
end
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Sam
Greary
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IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
161 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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