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Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take rRDL
Dear Mr Smith, I am Ana, residing at B-3, 3rd cross, St. Marks Colony. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the prevailing conditions of the available furnitures in the house. While the stay in house is complacent, there are furnitures which are not acceptable. Let me explain the condition, the wardrobe has a broken glass attached to it. The pieces of this broken glass falls on the floor everyday. Additionally, there is a drawer whose handle is broken. As a result, the drawer is inaccessable. I would highly appreciate if the following actions are taken. Firstly, the mirror should be replace with a new one to avoid any injury caused due to the damaged mirror pieces. Secondly, a carpenter is required to fix a grip to the chest, so that it could be used. I would be pleased to supply any further information you require. Hope to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ana
Dear Mr Smith,

I am Ana, residing at B-3, 3rd cross, St. Marks Colony. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the prevailing conditions of the available
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furnitures
in the
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house
.

While the stay in
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house
is complacent, there are
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furnitures
which are not acceptable.
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Let
me
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explain
the condition, the wardrobe has a broken glass attached to it. The pieces of this broken glass falls on the floor
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
.
Additionally
, there is a drawer whose handle
is broken
.
As a result
, the drawer is
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inaccessable
.

I would
highly
appreciate if the following actions
are taken
.
Firstly
, the mirror should be
Consider using the past participle "replaced"?
replace
with a new one to avoid any injury caused due to the damaged mirror pieces.
Secondly
, a carpenter
is required
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
a grip to the chest,
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so
that it could be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
.

I would be
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pleased
to supply any
further
information you require.

Hope to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ana

IELTS letter Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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