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You recently went on a holiday tour for a week. Your friend lent you a guide book. Write a letter to thank your friend. In your letter - Tell your friend about the holiday - Explain how the guidebook was helpful - Tell him/her when and how you will return the guide book.

You recently went on a holiday tour for a week. Your friend lent you a guide book. Write a letter to thank your friend. In your letter - Tell your friend about the holiday - Explain how the guidebook was helpful - Tell him/her when and how you will return the guide book. d7Do
Dear Jenny, I am very thrilled to share my experience about vacation in Europe with you. It was so grateful that you gave me a guide book which made my tour very cosy and pleasant. Jenny, Europe is heaven on the Earth. Wow, what a trip! I am so much delighted with its weather and cruise journey. We cruised for 2 nights from Barcelona to Florence. And when we had reached at Florence, we got perplexed as we didn’t have any idea about how to spend our day there. Afterwards I suddenly remembered about a travelogue you lent me on so I straight forwardly picked that one and planned our 2 days in Florence. Moreover, I also helped some people whom were along with us during these holidays to make their plan with help of this catalogue. I know you have to forward this guidebook to your cousin. I wanted to meet you personally to return book but I am feeling bit under the weather consequently I would currier it next week. Thanks for such an amazing help by lending me book and I am looking forward to meet you soon so that I can share more about my experience with you. Yours Sincerely, Penny You recently went on a holiday tour for a week. Your friend lent you a guide book. Write a letter to thank your friend. In your letter - Tell your friend about the holiday - Explain how the guidebook was helpful - Tell him/her when and how you will return the guide book. You recently went on a holiday tour for a week. Your friend lent you a guide book. Write a letter to thank your friend. In your letter - Tell your friend about the holiday - Explain how the guidebook was helpful - Tell him/her when and how you will return the guide book. You recently went on a holiday tour for a week. Your friend lent you a guide book. Write a letter to thank your friend. In your letter - Tell your friend about the holiday - Explain how the guidebook was helpful - Tell him/her when and how you will return the guide book.
Dear Jenny,

I am
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very
thrilled to share my experience about vacation in Europe with you. It was
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so
grateful that you gave me a
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guide
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book
which made my
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tour
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very
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cosy
and pleasant.

Jenny, Europe is heaven on the Earth. Wow, what a trip! I am
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so
much delighted with its weather and cruise journey. We cruised for 2 nights from Barcelona to Florence. And when we had reached at Florence, we
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got
perplexed as we didn’t have any
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idea
about how to spend our day there. Afterwards I
suddenly
remembered about a travelogue you lent me on
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so
I straight
forwardly
picked that one and planned our 2 days in Florence.
Moreover
, I
also
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helped
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some
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people
whom were along with us during these
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holidays
to
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make
their plan with
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help
of this
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catalogue
.

I know you
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have to
forward this
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guidebook
to your cousin. I wanted to
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meet
you
personally
to
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return
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book
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but
I am feeling
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bit
under the weather
consequently
I
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would currier
it
next
week.

Thanks for such an amazing
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help
by lending me
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book and
I am looking forward to
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meet
you
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soon
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so
that I can share more about my experience with you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Penny You recently went on a
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holiday
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tour
for a week. Your
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friend
lent you a
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guide
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book
. Write a letter to thank your
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friend
. In your letter

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-
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Tell
your
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friend
about the
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holiday


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-
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Explain
how the
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guidebook
was helpful

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-
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Tell
him/her when and how you will
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return
the
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guide
book.

You recently went on a
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holiday
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tour
for a week. Your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
lent you a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
guide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. Write a letter to thank your
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friend
. In your letter

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-
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Tell
your
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friend
about the
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holiday


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-
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Explain
how the
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guidebook
was helpful

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-
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Tell
him/her when and how you will
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return
the
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guide
book.

You recently went on a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
holiday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tour
for a week. Your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
lent you a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
guide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. Write a letter to thank your
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friend
. In your letter

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-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Tell
your
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friend
about the
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holiday


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-
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Explain
how the
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guidebook
was helpful

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-
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Tell
him/her when and how you will
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return
the
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guide
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book
.
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IELTS letter You recently went on a holiday tour for a week. Your friend lent you a guide book. Write a letter to thank your friend. In your letter - Tell your friend about the holiday - Explain how the guidebook was helpful - Tell him/her when and how you will return the guide book.

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  American English
12 paragraphs
355 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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