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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there RxWV
Hello Friend, I m really excited to hear that you are coming to my city for work. First of all you are most welcome if you decided to reach here but on a serious note there are no jobs available in Canada. Due to the fact that pandemic everyone is jobless here, The Government made strictly rule that the priority given to the citizens of Canada for employment not for outsiders so dear friend don't get it the wrong way on the contrary if you come here then you ought to not only do so much struggle for job hunting but also owing to the fact that high expenses you lost all your savings also. Everything in this country is highly expensive if you have job then only you can survive but on the scenario, Ontario is a most wonderful city in Canada. There are magnificent places must visit and the local transportation is very low-cost. Peoples are kind and friendly you can effortlessly make acquaintance here, they are helping in nature. Hoping to see you in the near future! yours lovingly, xyz
Hello Friend,
I m
really
excited to hear that you are coming to my city for work.
First of all
you are most welcome if you decided to reach here
but
on a serious note there are no jobs available in Canada. Due to the fact that pandemic everyone is jobless here, The
Government
made
strictly
rule
that the priority
given
to the citizens of Canada for employment not for outsiders
so
dear friend don't
get
it the
wrong
way
on the contrary
if you
come
here then you ought to not
only
do
so
much struggle for job hunting
but
also
owing to the fact that high expenses you lost all your savings
also
. Everything in this country is
highly
expensive if you have job then
only
you can survive
but
on the scenario, Ontario is a most wonderful city in Canada. There are magnificent places
must
visit and the local transportation is
very
low-cost. Peoples are kind and friendly you can
effortlessly
make
acquaintance here, they are helping in nature. Hoping to
see
you in the near future!
yours
lovingly
,
xyz
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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