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TASK1 describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

TASK1 describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer Xnr1w
Dear Sir/madam I wanted to draw your attention towards the problem I am facing. I share the room with xyz she used to be a great roommate but unfortunately from the last 2 months she is consistently inviting her friends over and they create a lot of noise in the room. They play loud music all night and leave there stuff around. I tried talking to her about this matter, but the situation is recurring. I have a lot of assignments and its really difficult to complete it in the disturbing environment. Its a humble request to change my accommodation as soon as possible because everyone desires a stress free environment when they get home. I would be fortunate if I can get a single room with attached bathroom and a little kitchen. My exams are next month, and I would be grateful if I can get the new accommodation by next week. Thank you. Yours’ Faithfully ABC
Dear Sir/madam

I wanted to draw your attention towards the problem I am facing. I share the room with
xyz
she
used
to be a great roommate
but
unfortunately from the last 2 months she is
consistently
inviting her friends
over and
they create
a lot of
noise in the room. They play loud music all night and
leave
there stuff around. I tried talking to her about this matter,
but
the situation is recurring. I have
a lot of
assignments and
its
really
difficult to complete it in the disturbing environment.
Its
a humble request to
change
my accommodation as
soon
as possible
because
everyone desires a
stress
free environment when they
get
home. I would be fortunate if I can
get
a single room with attached bathroom and a
little
kitchen. My exams are
next
month, and I would be grateful if I can
get
the new accommodation by
next
week.

Thank you.

Yours’
Faithfully


ABC
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IELTS letter TASK1 describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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