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You are attending a training programmer in UK for 1 month . The person who is organizing this programme is looking for a social events organizer and he intends to identify someone from the participants. Write to him expressing your interest in taking up this role. Highlight what are your credentials and also seek more information about this role.on this role.n

You are attending a training programmer in UK for 1 month. The person who is organizing this programme is looking for a social events organizer and he intends to identify someone from the participants. Write to him expressing your interest in taking up this role. Highlight what are your credentials and also seek more information about this role. on this role. n 755QY
Dear Mr. Brown I am writing to you in connection with the 1 month training programme that I am planning to attend in UK, starting on the 1st of August. I have been given to understand that you are looking for someone to take up the role of social events organizer and I wish to express my interest and inclination towards this role. I would like to detail below my credentials for the same. I have been an active member of the social and cultural club ever since my school days. Infact, I was the head of the social and cultural committee at school, where we organized many events like alumni reunion meet, student cultural exchange programmes, and inter school music event. Currently, I am the head of the social events group in the organization that I work for. Here too I have been organizing various social events which include many CSR (Corporate Social Responsibility) activities like vaccination drive for employees and their families, planting of trees to drive more greenery in the neighbourhood, just to name a few. Although I have work commitments, I have always been able to balance and take time out for these activities without any impact on my work. Infact my belief is that, an individual needs to find avenues to give back to the society and there is nothing better than contributing to social events that spread overall happiness. I would be keen to understand more about this role and the expectations that you may have. . I am open to discussing this with you in more detail at your convenience. I can be reached at 4086914782. Also I would be happy share references around my involvement in social events, if you are keen to speak with them. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Roger Harper
Dear Mr. Brown

I am writing to you in connection with the
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1 month
training
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programme
that I am planning to attend in UK, starting on the 1st of August. I have been
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given
to understand that you are looking for someone to take up the role of
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social
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events
organizer and I wish to express my interest and inclination towards this role.
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I
would like to detail below my credentials for the same.

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I
have been an active member of the
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social
and cultural club ever since my school days.
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Infact
, I was the head of the
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social
and cultural committee at school, where we organized
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many
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events
like alumni reunion
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meet
, student cultural exchange
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programmes
, and inter school music
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event
.
Currently
, I am the head of the
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social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
group in the organization that I work for. Here too I have been organizing various
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
which include
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many
CSR (Corporate
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Social
Responsibility) activities like vaccination drive for employees and their families, planting of trees to drive more greenery in the
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neighbourhood
,
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just
to name a few. Although I have work commitments, I have always been able to balance and take time out for these activities without any impact on my work.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Infact
my belief is that, an individual needs to find avenues to give back to the society and there is nothing better than contributing to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
that spread
overall
happiness.

I would be keen to understand more about this role and the expectations that you may have.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
I am open to discussing this with you in more detail at your convenience.
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I
can
be reached
at 4086914782.
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Also
I would be happy share references around my involvement in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
, if you are keen to speak with them.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely


Roger Harper
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IELTS letter You are attending a training programmer in UK for 1 month. The person who is organizing this programme is looking for a social events organizer and he intends to identify someone from the participants. Write to him expressing your interest in taking up this role. Highlight what are your credentials and also seek more information about this role. on this role. n

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