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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher in your letter give details of your job Explain why it is impory to you . Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher in your letter give details of your job Explain why it is impory to you. Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference LO1p

Respected Mr. Smith, I am Jordan, who was your student in B. Sc Nursing class of 2016. I hope you are doing well. I am writing this lettey to seek a letter of reference from you to support my application for the job of a nursing tutor in Brock university. This is a great opportunity to get my dream job as I have been always passionate for teaching profession. Moreover, this study institute is marked as the one of top ranked universities. So,

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IELTS letter You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher in your letter give details of your job Explain why it is impory to you. Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

83 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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