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You are about to do a part-time course while working and write a letter to the organization head who announced they can help financially for these types of students. · Explain your experience and qualifications. · Describe the part-time course you are going to do. · Explain how this will help you.

You are about to do a part-time course while working and write a letter to the organization head who announced they can help financially for these types of students. · Explain your experience and qualifications. · Describe the part-time course you are going to do. · Explain how this will help you. Old9j
Dear sir, I am vikas, and writing this letter to put forth my name for the financial assistance you are providing to the jobbers who enrolled them in part-time courses along with. First and foremost, i would delight to mention that academically, i had completed Masters in Commerce in 2014. Professionally, i have been working in a multinational corporation since 2015. Presently, i gave plethora of opportunities to foster the pace of my career ahead. What i really need is, Tally, a three to four months course and i am planning for the same. In order to pursue my high-yielding dreams, i am looking for some monetary support as well. I assure you, if i would get your selfless assistance, i will not only complete this short term course but also be able to tap outstanding sure-shots in my profession. Hope to hear from your side an optimistic revert. Yours Sincerely, vikas
Dear

sir,

I am

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vikas
, and writing this letter to put forth my name for the financial

assistance you are providing to the jobbers who enrolled them in part-time courses

along with.

First
and foremost,
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i
would delight to mention

that
academically
,
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i
had completed Masters in Commerce in 2014.
Professionally
,

Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have been working in a multinational corporation since 2015.

Presently
,

Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
gave plethora of opportunities to foster the pace of my career ahead. What
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i


really
need is, Tally, a three to four months course and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am planning for the

same. In order to pursue my high-yielding dreams,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am looking for
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some
monetary

support
as well
.

I assure

you, if
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i
would
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get
your selfless assistance,
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i
will not
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only
complete this

short term course
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but
also
be able to tap outstanding sure-shots in my

profession.

Hope

to hear from your side an optimistic revert.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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vikas
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IELTS letter You are about to do a part-time course while working and write a letter to the organization head who announced they can help financially for these types of students. · Explain your experience and qualifications. · Describe the part-time course you are going to do. · Explain how this will help you.

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10 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
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