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Apology letter for missing birthday party

Apology letter for missing birthday party BYPjj
Dear SaraI am writing to apologize for my absence in your birthday party which was planned to be held on last Monday. I hope you had a wonderful day. First of all thank you for your inviting me to your birthday party. I had planned for a long time to go to my birthday but on the contrary I had a lot of work to do that day. I was feeling bad. When I finished my work, I went to see a doctor. It takes a long time. Distracted by work, I forgot I had to go to your birthday party. When I was preparing for class, I saw the invitation letter on the table which you sent for your birthday. Then I remembered that I was going to your birthday party but it was too late. In order to justify my guilt, I invite you and your family to dinner. All payments are in my account. Hope you might like this idea and accept my sincere apologies. Your friend Lola
Dear
SaraI
am
writing to apologize for my absence
in your birthday
party which
was planned
to
be held
on last Monday. I hope you had a wonderful day.

First of all
thank you for your inviting me to your birthday party.

I had planned for a long time to go to my birthday
but
on the contrary
I had
a lot of
work to do that day. I was feeling
bad
. When I finished my work, I went to
see
a doctor. It takes a long time. Distracted by work, I forgot I had to go to your birthday party. When I was preparing for
class
, I
saw
the invitation letter on the table which you
sent
for your birthday. Then I remembered that I was going to your birthday party
but
it was too late.

In order to justify my guilt, I invite you and your family to dinner. All payments are in my account. Hope you might like this
idea
and accept my sincere apologies.

Your friend Lola
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IELTS letter Apology letter for missing birthday party

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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