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You are a student who wants to apply to Green Pines college. you are experiencing financial problems at the moment. write a letter to the principal

You are a student who wants to apply to Green Pines college. you are experiencing financial problems at the moment. write a letter to the principal OggMj
Dear Sir, I am Sumit, and I am writing this letter to share an issue faced by me. Recently, I have completed my graduation in commerce from Mc Molar college with 86% percent of marks. Now, I would like to pursue my master's from your respective institute, but I am afraid that my present financial condition will not allow me to get admission to your college. I came from an anuclear family and there is only my father who is working in a cloth manufacturing company in the position of supervisor. As, his salary is not sufficient to bear expansive university fees, therefore I worked part-time jobs for earning my tuition charges. however, my funds were supported me in completing graduation but it is not sufficient to bear your institute expenses. Recently, I got to know that, Green Pines college offer scholarships for aspirants as per their academic records. therefore, I would like to know if I am a suitable candidate for any scholarship program run by your school. If, I do not lie under the financial award, then please suggest to me other modes for arranging the required funds for the course. I hope you understand my current situation and advise me very soon. Eagerly, awaiting your response on the issue. Yours Sincerely, Sumit
Dear Sir,

I am
Sumit
, and I am writing this letter to share an issue faced by me. Recently, I have completed my graduation in commerce from
Mc
Molar college with 86% percent of marks.
Now
, I would like to pursue my master's from your respective institute,
but
I am afraid that my present financial condition will not
allow
me to
get
admission to your college.

I came from an
anuclear
family and there is
only
my father who is working in a cloth manufacturing
company
in the position of supervisor. As, his salary is not sufficient to bear expansive university fees,
therefore
I worked part-time jobs for earning my tuition charges.
however
, my funds
were supported
me in completing graduation
but
it is not sufficient to bear your institute expenses.

Recently, I
got
to know that, Green Pines college offer scholarships for aspirants as per their academic records.
therefore
, I would like to know if I am a suitable candidate for any scholarship program run by your school.

If, I do not lie under the financial award, then
please
suggest to me other modes for arranging the required funds for the course.

I hope you understand my
current
situation and advise me
very
soon
.
Eagerly
, awaiting your response on the issue.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Sumit
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IELTS letter You are a student who wants to apply to Green Pines college. you are experiencing financial problems at the moment. write a letter to the principal

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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