job vacancy in newspaper writing an email for the manager

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing regarding the job application for Social Media officer that you posted in the newspaper. My name is Edelyn Najoan. I am 21 years old and recently graduated from the University of Technology Sydney in August 2021. I have a Business bachelor's degree majoring in Finance and Marketing. As for my work experience, I have just finished my six months internship in the Shopee branding intern team. My responsibilities include maintaining the Shopee brand message across social media platforms, appointing a suitable brand ambassador for each monthly campaign, and ensuring the ads broadcasted are in line with Shopee brand image. I truly enjoyed my time at Shopee as it aligned with my current area of interest in marketing. Thus, I believe I am qualified to be in your team as a Social Media officer since I have broad marketing knowledge and have practised it in the real world. Moreover, I am excellent at working in a team and have experience in leading one. I have good communication and time management skills. Though I might need to learn more about the company cultures and market area, I assure you that I can be a good asset to your company. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Best regards, Edelyn