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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to get some information about your courses. Firstly, how is your school and which sciences have in there? In addition I want to know that comforts of your school for foreign students. Finally I would like to get date about your courses playment. How can I payment? Especially I would like tonpay cash for a year. Iwant to study an English course so can I stay at dormitory? How comforts are there in hostel? I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Yours faithfully

Dear Sir/Madam

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I look forward to receiving a prompt reply.

Yours faithfully

IELTS letter You want study English course ask about

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American English

6 paragraphs

88 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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