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Thanks a lot for accepting my request to take care of my house and pet while I will be out of the town. The following details will help you in doing this task.

Thanks a lot for accepting my request to take care of my house and pet while I will be out of the town. The following details will help you in doing this task. L38p6

Dear Anaya, Thanks a lot for accepting my request to take care of my house and pet while I will be out of the town. The following details will help you in doing this task. Firstly, please not my contact details while I will be in UK for my exams. It is a landline number 022399927387 of the apartment which I have rented. My India’s number will be switched off during my stay. Despite being busy in study, I will try not to miss any of your call. Secondly, you know Shabby, my dog is a bit sensitive and fussy pet. This will be difficult to handle him. Please note, do not give him any meat, he only prefers having milk with some carbohydrates. You can either give him some biscuits or bread. In addition, make sure you take him for a walk before sleep. Lastly, there are some other household chores you may have to do in my absence. The milkman reaches home at 9: 00 AM daily, please do not miss to take milk. Moreover, cleaner will come every Monday, kindly guide him in doing his work. Although grocery is full in the kitchen, you may need to buy some. Hoping you are comfortable in doing this; please write me back for any support! With love, Priya.

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Anaya
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 and pet while I will be out of the town. The following This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
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help
 you in doing this task.

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please
 not my contact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 while I will be in UK for my exams. It is a landline number 022399927387 of the apartment which I have rented. My India’s number will be switched
 off during my stay. Despite being busy in study, I will try not to miss any of your call.

Secondly
, you know Shabby, my dog is a bit sensitive and fussy pet. This will be difficult to handle him. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsatisfygratifyamuseticklecheerentertain
Please
 note, do not give him any meat, he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 prefers having milk with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 carbohydrates. You can either give him This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 biscuits or bread. In addition
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make
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before
 sleep.

Lastly
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some
 other household chores you may This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 do in my absence. The milkman reaches home at 9: 00 AM daily, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsatisfygratifyamuseticklecheerentertain
please
 do not The verb 'miss' is used with the gerund form: "miss taking".miss taking
miss to take
 milk. Moreover
, cleaner will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 every Monday, kindly guide him in doing his work. Although grocery is full in the kitchen, you may need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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some
.

Hoping you are comfortable in doing this; You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsatisfygratifyamuseticklecheerentertain
please
 write me back for any support!

With This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
,

Priya. 