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You applied for a new passport, and it got delayed. Due to this delay, you missed your (study) intake. You are very disappointed over this delay. Write a letter to Regional Passport Office for the same. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what happened and how you are at loss • s say what you wantthe officer to do

You applied for a new passport, and it got delayed. Due to this delay, you missed your (study) intake. You are very disappointed over this delay. Write a letter to Regional Passport Office for the same. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what happened and how you are at loss • s say what you wantthe officer to do YLwoV
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Nikita, and my passport number is YH75432. I am writing this letter to show my disappointment regarding the delay caused by your officers in issuing my new passport. The application number is THY67899. Let me elaborate on the situation. I applied for a new passport on 15th April 2021 as the expiration of my old passport was 1st June 2021. Thereafter I had a flight to Canada and I was traveling abroad for my further studies on 3rd July 2021. As per the passport office website, the standard processing time for a new passport is 30 days, however, in my case, it took more than a month. This delay caused me to miss the 2021 intake. For this reason, I would request you to do an investigation on this matter and share the reason for the delay caused. Lost time would not be compensated by any means but I would like to have an apology letter from your department. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Yours Faithfully, Nikita
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Nikita, and my
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passport
number is YH75432. I am writing this letter to
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show
my disappointment regarding the delay caused by your officers in issuing my new
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passport
. The application number is THY67899.

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Let
me elaborate on the situation. I applied for a new
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passport
on 15th April 2021 as the expiration of my
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old
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passport
was 1st June 2021.
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Thereafter
I had a flight to
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Canada and
I was traveling abroad for my
further
studies on 3rd July 2021. As per the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passport
office website, the standard processing time for a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passport
is 30 days,
however
, in my case, it took more than a month. This delay caused me to miss the 2021 intake.

For this reason
, I would request you to do an investigation on this matter and share the reason for the delay caused. Lost time would not
be compensated
by any means
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I would like to have an apology letter from your department.

Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Nikita

IELTS letter You applied for a new passport, and it got delayed. Due to this delay, you missed your (study) intake. You are very disappointed over this delay. Write a letter to Regional Passport Office for the same. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what happened and how you are at loss • s say what you wantthe officer to do

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