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You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely dissatisfied with the experience.

You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely dissatisfied with the experience. 2R3ej
Dear Sir or Madam, In order to celebrate a special case, My friend and I came to eat meal at your restaurant, this experience was too unsatisfaction. I am writing this letter to inform you that I fell so bad and advice to give your waiters course about how to talk to your customer. We have been working at ABC company since 2013. Despite the fact that we were happy to have taken a promotion at our job, all positive feeling was gone by your staff. We visited your remarkable restaurant around 8 pm yesterday. It took almost 30 minutes to reach the place. One blonde lady met us when we entered the restaurant. And then one rude man came and talked to us loudly and unwillingly. He was not carrying his badge, so that is the reason why I can not say his name. I would be very grateful if you could give him a punishment. At least, he can learn not to do such behavior to anyone even if it is not a customer. Thank you for giving your attention. I look forward to hearing your response. Yours Faithfully, Muhammet Ali Karabulut
Dear Sir or Madam,

In order to celebrate a special case, My friend and I came to eat meal at your restaurant, this experience was too unsatisfaction. I am writing this letter to inform you that I fell
so
bad
and advice to give your waiters course about how to talk to your customer.

We have been working at ABC
company
since 2013. Despite the fact that we were happy to have taken a promotion at our job, all
positive
feeling
was gone
by your staff.

We visited your remarkable restaurant around 8 pm yesterday. It took almost 30 minutes to reach the place. One blonde lady met us when we entered the restaurant. And then one rude
man
came and talked to us
loudly
and
unwillingly
. He was not carrying his badge,
so
that is
the reason why I can not say his name.

I would be
very
grateful if you could give him a punishment. At least, he can learn not to do such behavior to anyone even if it is not a customer.

Thank you for giving your attention. I look forward to hearing your response.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Muhammet
Ali
Karabulut
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IELTS letter You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely dissatisfied with the experience.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
193 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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