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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

Hi Sarah, I got your letter yesterday and it makes me so glad to know that you are finally moving to Pakistan. Since you’ll be moving to Lahore, you don’t have to worry about anything as I’ll help you to settle in. Regarding the accommodation, I would suggest you find a room in the DHA colony as the rooms in this area are quite affordable. Moreover, it is located in the center of the city so you’ll be closer to the market. The transport system is not very efficient but recently we have seen a rise in coaches introduced by private companies. They are cheap and reliable for traveling around. I must tell you that Lahore is a very happening city and you’ll have numerous opportunities to socialize. For detailed information, you can join the ‘Events in Lahore’ group on Facebook updates regarding events that are happening every week. Looking forward to meeting you. Do let me know about your flight details so we can plan further. With love, Ifrah.

Hi Sarah,

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so
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have to
 worry about anything as I’ll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you to settle in.

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, it is located
 in the center of the city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you’ll be closer to the market.

The transport system is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 efficient This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 recently we have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 a rise in coaches introduced by private This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
. They are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 and reliable for traveling around.

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must
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tell
 you that Lahore is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happening Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).city, and
city and
 you’ll have numerous opportunities to socialize. For detailed information, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the ‘This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
Events
 in Lahore’ group on Facebook updates regarding This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 that are happening every week.

Looking forward to meeting you. Do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know about your flight This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
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so
 we can plan further
.

With This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
,

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Ifrah
. 