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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

Hi Sarah, I got your letter yesterday and it makes me so glad to know that you are finally moving to Pakistan. Since you’ll be moving to Lahore, you don’t have to worry about anything as I’ll help you to settle in. Regarding the accommodation, I would suggest you find a room in the DHA colony as the rooms in this area are quite affordable. Moreover, it is located in the center of the city so you’ll be closer to the market. The transport system is not very efficient but recently we have seen a rise in coaches introduced by private companies. They are cheap and reliable for traveling around. I must tell you that Lahore is a very happening city and you’ll have numerous opportunities to socialize. For detailed information, you can join the ‘Events in Lahore’ group on Facebook updates regarding events that are happening every week. Looking forward to meeting you. Do let me know about your flight details so we can plan further. With love, Ifrah.
Hi Sarah,

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in Lahore’ group on Facebook updates regarding
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that are happening every week.

Looking forward to meeting you. Do
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

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8 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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