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you are working in manufacture unit. your co workers harassed you number of time during the work time.

you are working in manufacture unit. your co workers harassed you number of time during the work time. EBaR
Hello Mark, I am Writing this letter to inform you about problem that i am facing from couple of months and I have had to face many difficulties because of such issues. Initially, when i was new in this company, john smith, who is working as store manager is harassing me. I ignored that in starting thinking that he will stop eventually but this is happening all of the time. As i discussed this with other colleagues i came to know that two other people are facing same thing.
Hello Mark,

I am Writing this letter to inform you about problem that
i
am facing from
couple of
months and I have had to face
many
difficulties
because
of such issues.
Initially
, when
i
was new in this
company
, john smith, who is working as store manager is harassing me. I
ignored
that in starting thinking that he will
stop
eventually
but
this is happening
all of the
time.

As
i
discussed this with other colleagues
i
came to know that two other
people
are facing same thing.
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IELTS letter you are working in manufacture unit. your co workers harassed you number of time during the work time.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
89 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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