Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

you are working in manufacture unit. your co workers harassed you number of time during the work time.

you are working in manufacture unit. your co workers harassed you number of time during the work time. EBaR

Hello Mark, I am Writing this letter to inform you about problem that i am facing from couple of months and I have had to face many difficulties because of such issues. Initially, when i was new in this company, john smith, who is working as store manager is harassing me. I ignored that in starting thinking that he will stop eventually but this is happening all of the time. As i discussed this with other colleagues i came to know that two other people are facing same thing.

Hello Mark,

I am Writing this letter to inform you about problem that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am facing from It seems that an article is missing.a couple of
couple of
 months and I have had to face This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 difficulties This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of such issues. Initially
, when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was new in this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, john smith, who is working as store manager is harassing me. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglected
ignored
 that in starting thinking that he will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
eventually
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this is happening Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 time.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 discussed this with other colleagues Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 came to know that two other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are facing same thing. 

IELTS letter you are working in manufacture unit. your co workers harassed you number of time during the work time.

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

89 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
?
One main idea per paragraph
?
Include an introduction and conclusion
?
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
?
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
?
Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
?
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Labels Descriptions

?
Currently is not available
Meet the criteria
Doesn't meet the criteria