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Imagine that you work for Hudson Design. Write an e-mail to Human Resources.

Imagine that you work for Hudson Design. Write an e-mail to Human Resources. DYg3k
Dear Human Resources Team. I’m a graphic designer. I like Hudson Design INC company because of beautiful view, moreover, it located in New York. My colleagues are friendly and helpful. There’s a lot of variety in my job. My work always changes and this is very interesting. However, There are some problems I don’t like about my job. My boss always announces the project too late. The deadline is too fast, so as to complete the project on time, I have to work all night. The workload is big, boss is never satisfied with my product. He asked me to give him it each day. I’m under pressure and stressed. My work start at 8 a. m to 9. pm, I don't even take a nap at break time, so my health declines. However, my salary is not what I expected. I think the company should hire more employees in this possition, reduce workload and let staff works in flexible hours. In addition, I think boss should announces project early and have a clear goal for everyone. I hope the boss gives me 2 days off at week to relax. I hope my ideas are useful.
Dear Human Resources Team.

I’m a graphic designer. I like Hudson Design INC
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view,
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, it located in New York. My colleagues are friendly and helpful. There’s
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a lot of
variety in my job. My
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work
always
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changes
and this is
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very
interesting.

However
, There are
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some
problems I don’t like about my job. My boss always announces the project too late. The deadline is too
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fast
,
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so as to
complete the project on time, I
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have to
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work
all night. The workload is
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big
, boss is never satisfied with my product. He asked me to give him it each day. I’m under pressure and
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stressed
.

My
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, I don't even take a nap at break time,
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so
my health declines.
However
, my salary is not what I
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expected
.

I
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should hire more employees in this
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workload and
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let
staff works in flexible hours.
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announces
project early and have a
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clear
goal for everyone. I hope the boss gives me 2 days off at week to relax.

I hope my
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ideas
are useful.
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IELTS letter Imagine that you work for Hudson Design. Write an e-mail to Human Resources.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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