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Writing a letter to your university

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are in the best of health. I am writing regarding your request to send my Master's Degree to the University of Ontario tech. let me elaborate in detail. My Master's Degree has not been prepared since I was graduated because there are some rules in my University for the issuance of my certificate. After requesting to get my Master's Degree, The Authority of the university gave me a temporary Master's Degree and the transcripts of grades, and they said my authentic Master’s certificate will prepare in the December of 2021. It would be great if it is possible to let me send my temporary Master's Degree and my transcripts of grades that verified by The Directorate-General document and certificate translators Affairs of Justice of the Islamic Republic and Ministry of foreign affairs. In addition, when I arrive in Canada, I bring my authentic Master’s Degree for you. Hoping to your cooperation in this matter. I will be anxiously awaiting to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Mojtaba Zolfaghari
Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope you are in the best of health. I am writing regarding your request to
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Master's
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to the University of Ontario tech.
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let
me elaborate in detail.

My
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Master's
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Degree
has not
been prepared
since I
was graduated
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because
there are
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some
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rules
in my University for the issuance of my certificate. After requesting to
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get
my
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Master's
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Degree
, The Authority of the university gave me a temporary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Master's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Degree
and the transcripts of grades, and they said my authentic Master’s certificate will prepare in the
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December of 2021
. It would be great if it is possible to
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let
me
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send
my temporary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Master's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Degree
and my transcripts of grades that verified by The Directorate-General document and certificate translators Affairs of Justice of the Islamic Republic and Ministry of foreign affairs.
In addition
, when I arrive in Canada, I bring my authentic Master’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Degree
for you.

Hoping to your cooperation in this matter.

I will be
anxiously
awaiting to hear from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Zolfaghari
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IELTS letter Writing a letter to your university

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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