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letter thank you for your bestfriend

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Thank you for being with me for the past 5 years. Thank you for being by my side when I need you the most - either whenever I’m sad or happy. Thank you for always listening to my every confide and keeping it under your hat. Thank you for always being the one who keeps me motivated every time I fall. Thank you for believing in me even when I lose hope in myself, for always encouraging, comforting, and always encouraging. Thank you for always understanding my heartless words. Thank you for always being honest with me. Thank you for always making up first in every argument. Thank you for your patience with my annoying, irritable personality. Thank you for the times we're together, the times when we don’t need to mask our thoughts but just be ourselves. Thank you for having never left me whenever I needed you, no matter how sunny or rainy it has been - in the past many years. Thank you for not bothering about your precious relaxing time getting outside to pick me up at 5 A. M for the sake of my safety. After family, you are the second most important person to me. There is a common saying that finding a "real" best friend - who is willing to listen to and share all your problems - is very difficult. Never have I ever thought about one day when there will be someone else as willing to run to me whenever I need to share my joys and sorrows as you are. I feel so lucky to have found such a person in my life. Thanks for everything.
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you for being with me for the past 5 years.
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you for being by my side when I need you the most
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either whenever I’m sad or happy.
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you for always listening to my every confide and keeping it under your hat.
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you for always being the one who
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me motivated every
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time
I fall.
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you for believing in me even when I lose hope in myself, for always encouraging, comforting, and always encouraging.
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you for always understanding my heartless words.
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you for always being honest with me.
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you for always making up
first
in every argument.
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you for your patience with my annoying, irritable personality.
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you for the
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times
we're together, the
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when we don’t need to mask our thoughts
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be ourselves.
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you for having never
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left
me whenever I needed you, no matter how sunny or rainy it has been
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in the past
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many
years.
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you for not bothering about your precious relaxing
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time
getting outside to pick me up at 5 A. M for the sake of my safety. After family, you are the second most
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important
person to me. There is a common saying that finding a
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real
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best friend
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who is willing to listen to and share all your problems
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is
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difficult. Never have I ever
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thought
about one day when there will be someone else as willing to run to me whenever I need to share my joys and sorrows as you are. I feel
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lucky to have found such a person in my life.
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for everything.
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IELTS letter letter thank you for your bestfriend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
276 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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