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The local library is collecting data to improve its quality. Write a letter to: express your thoughts about the place, talk a bout its weaknesses that needs to be improved and further comments

The local library is collecting data to improve its quality. Write a letter to: express your thoughts about the place, talk a bout its weaknesses that needs to be improved and further comments kxEen
Dear Sir or Madam, Let me introduce myself as a loyal reader who has been to the local public library an uncountable amount of times. I have recently heard that you are collecting library users' opinions to improve the library's quality, hence, I would like to take part in evolving such a useful destination. To begin with, there are many compliments about the positivity of the place, and people who have volunteered to look after it. The wooden shelves and books were invariably organized, the tables that were put next to the windows which exposed a heart-melting vista of the natural green outside. Chairs and pillows were comfortable. Though the organizations are interim, it had produced a lot of pleasant moments. Therefore, I am grateful for the carefully designed pieces of furniture that have created a tranquil atmosphere and supported readers to concentrate easier. Despite the fact that it had brought a lot of enthusiasm, there are still several issues I am willing to state, the walls' paint was not decent and it had got on my outfit several times, furthermore, food stains were not usually refined, which lead to horrible smells afterward. So you might want to consider repainting the walls, and it is better to forbid bringing food into the library for the repercussion of stinks. Additionally, I also suggest a children's books section to encourage fondness in literature and studying from a young age, hence they could develop observing skills. The several aforementioned comments of mine about the strengths and vulnerabilities of the local public library. Hopefully, you would receive my ideas to improve and turn it into a superficial address for the neighborhood. Sincerely
Dear Sir or Madam,

Let
me introduce myself as a loyal reader who has been to the local public library an uncountable amount of times. I have recently heard that you are collecting library users' opinions to
improve
the library's quality,
hence
, I would like to
take part
in evolving such a useful destination.

To
begin
with, there are
many
compliments about the positivity of the place, and
people
who have volunteered to look after it. The wooden shelves and books were
invariably
organized, the tables that
were put
next
to the windows which exposed a heart-melting vista of the natural green outside. Chairs and pillows were comfortable. Though the organizations are interim, it had produced
a lot of
pleasant moments.
Therefore
, I am grateful for the
carefully
designed pieces of furniture that have created a tranquil atmosphere and supported readers to concentrate easier.

Despite the fact that it had brought
a lot of
enthusiasm, there are
still
several issues I am willing to state, the walls' paint was not decent and it had
got
on my outfit several times,
furthermore
, food stains were not
usually
refined, which lead to horrible smells afterward.
So
you might want to consider repainting the walls, and it is better to forbid bringing food into the library for the repercussion of stinks.
Additionally
, I
also
suggest a children's books section to encourage fondness in literature and studying from a young age,
hence
they could develop observing
skills
.

The several aforementioned comments of mine about the strengths and vulnerabilities of the local public library.
Hopefully
, you would receive my
ideas
to
improve
and turn it into a superficial address for the neighborhood.

Sincerely
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IELTS letter The local library is collecting data to improve its quality. Write a letter to: express your thoughts about the place, talk a bout its weaknesses that needs to be improved and further comments

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277 words
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