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You applying for a job as a teacher at school

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Dear Director I am writing to apply for a position as an english teacher at your school. I saw an advertisement on the sun yesterday so I am sending you. I graduated Samarqand State Of Foreign of Language Institute in 2013. I have been working at school. I have much experience to teach pupils in English at school. I worked very hard and l have enough knowledge in english becouse I I took C1 certificate in english. I am hardworking and energetic, however, I am sociable and ability to lead pupils correctly so l like pupils, I want to teach them becouse it give me much enjoyment. I hope you read my letter as soon as possible and help me. If I need you. I shall write my phone number. My cell is 998979811859. I wait you to call interview when it is convenient for you Yours faithfully Tom Jackson
Dear Director I am writing to apply for a position as an
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english
teacher at your school. I
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I am sending you. I
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graduated
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Samarqand
State Of Foreign of Language Institute in 2013.
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I
have been working at school.
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I
have much experience to teach pupils in English at school.
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I
worked
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very
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hard
and l have
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enough
knowledge in
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english
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becouse
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took C1 certificate in
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english
.
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I
am hardworking and energetic,
however
, I am sociable and ability to lead pupils
correctly
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l like pupils, I want to teach them
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becouse
it
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give
me much enjoyment.
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I
hope you read my letter as
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soon
as possible and
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help
me. If I need you. I shall write my phone number. My cell is 998979811859. I wait you to call interview when it is convenient for you

Yours
faithfully
Tom
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Jackson
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IELTS letter You applying for a job as a teacher at school

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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