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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a staff of IELTS6. 0 corporation, and I am writing to seek your support to find my papers which I forgot in your hotel. Last week, I contacted you to inquire about hiring a conference room for my company’s quarterly client’s meeting. As usual, our even have organized successfully in the most luxury room at your hotel which is CR. 19 in 15th floor and thank to your professional staff as well as top-notch facilities, our clients really satisfied during a long period of time meeting yesterday. Unfortunately, after returning home, I could not find a couple of extremely confidential folders which contained our new project and prospective clients’ data. Without these materials, my team cannot persuade our managers about ongoing plan and in case that information is releasing to outside, it adverse impact on our company’s reputation. I went directly to my home after leaving your hotel, therefore, I suppose that my documents are still left there. There is only a desk equipped with three drawers in the center of the conference room, and I have kept my folders in the middle drawer. I am going to attend another essential meeting with my customers, so it will have a little delay in coming back to your place tomorrow. Please kindly help me to search those files and contact to me at your earliest convenience through my mobile phone 085955888. Thank you very much indeed. Yours faithfully, Luc Nguyen
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a staff of IELTS6. 0
corporation
, and I am writing to seek your support to find my papers which I forgot in your hotel.

Last week, I contacted you to inquire about hiring a conference room for my
company
’s quarterly client’s meeting. As usual, our even have organized
successfully
in the most luxury room at your hotel which is CR. 19 in 15th floor and thank to your professional staff
as well
as top-notch facilities, our clients
really
satisfied during a long period of time meeting yesterday.

Unfortunately, after returning home, I could not find a couple of
extremely
confidential folders which contained our new project and prospective clients’ data. Without these materials, my team cannot persuade our managers about ongoing plan and in case that information is releasing to outside,
it
adverse impact on our
company
’s reputation.

I went
directly
to my home after leaving your hotel,
therefore
, I suppose that my documents are
still
left
there. There is
only
a desk equipped with three drawers in the center of the conference room, and I have
kept
my folders in the middle drawer.

I am going to attend another essential meeting with my customers,
so
it will have a
little
delay in coming back to your place tomorrow.
Please
kindly
help
me to search those files and contact to me at your earliest convenience through my mobile phone 085955888.

Thank you
very
much
indeed
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Luc
Nguyen
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IELTS letter papers forgot in your hotel

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
244 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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