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Writing a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things

Writing a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things Dn3A

I am Barkha Suthar. I am writing this letter to request you to check my things which I left in your hotel room. I stayed in your hotel on 5th to 7th March 2021. I was in room number 202. I left my laptop charger and file which carries my office details. The charger is of Dell company and a file color is red I would like to inform you that those both the things are very essential for me. Because without charger I can not operate my laptop and my work is stop. Nowadays because of this pandemic I am doing work from home. A file which has the details of my work is also important for me. Without this two things my work is not done properly. I am extremely grateful if you could contact me. You could send me this two things by courier service. I will pay you the expense of courier service by bank transfer. I would like to give my address to you. A-101, ABC Apartment, Near XYZ Residency, New Ranip, Ahmedabad. My mobile number is 9191919191, if you need some information. I hope you reply this letter as soon as possible. Yours sincerelyBarkha Suthar

I am Possible spelling mistake found.Bark ha
Barkha
Possible spelling mistake found.AuthorStarSugarLutherSitarSutler
Suthar
. I am writing this letter to request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my things which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 in your hotel room. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 stayed in your hotel on 5th to 7th March 2021. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was in room number 202. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 my laptop charger and file which carries my office This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
. The charger is of Dell This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and a file color is Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphred.red!red?red:red,red;
red


I would like to inform you that those both the things are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 essential for me. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 without charger I can not operate my laptop and my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
. Nowadays because of this
 pandemic I am doing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 from home. A file which has the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 is also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for me. Without this two things my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 is not done properly
.

I am extremely
 grateful if you could contact me. You could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me this two things by courier service. I will pay you the expense of courier service by bank transfer. I would like to give my address to you. A-101, ABC Apartment, Near XYZ Residency, New Possible spelling mistake found.Ra nip
Ranip
, Ahmedabad. My mobile number is 9191919191, if you need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information.

I hope you reply this letter as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.
sincerelyBarkha
Possible spelling mistake found.AuthorStarSugarLutherSitarSutler
Suthar