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Writing a letter to friend

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Dear johnGood morning, how are you doing today? I hope you are doing well. how is going on your business nowadays? I would like to ask you about your currently job are you enjoying that job? I want to come there to visit you. next month 10 th September and we talk each other and we share ours options. how many people are working there and how is your boss and team members. Some people are very nice to talk with us some are very bad they don’t have any support with teamYour sincerely Ram
Dear
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johnGood
morning, how are you doing
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today
? I hope you are doing well.
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how
is going on your business nowadays? I would like to ask you about your
currently
job are you enjoying that job? I want to
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come
there to visit you.
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next
month
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10 th
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September and
we talk each
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other and
we share ours options.
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how
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many
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people
are working there and how is your boss and team members.
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Some
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people
are
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very
nice to talk with us
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some
are
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very
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bad
they don’t have any support with
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teamYour
sincerely
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Ram
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IELTS letter Writing a letter to friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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